From bb9a83e3d29e38f26218134710c09ec0698bcb9e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Mathieu=20B=C3=A9langer?= <mbelanger.poly@outlook.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Nov 2020 17:57:52 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Various changes to content text for readability or style

---
 web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js | 2 +-
 web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js     | 2 +-
 web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js           | 2 +-
 web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js           | 2 +-
 web/src/views/performance/index.js                    | 2 +-
 5 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js
index a763237b..da766df8 100644
--- a/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js
+++ b/web/src/views/home/sections/call_to_action_section.js
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ const CallToActionSection = () => (
           <FloatingCard
             cardClassName="bg-gradient-warning"
             headerText="Record my sleep"
-            bodyText="Use our comprehensive guide to get your own results. It shows a list of the necessary equipment, the EEG montage, the hardware setup, and also gives some tips and tricks!"
+            bodyText="Use our comprehensive guide to get your own results. It shows a list of the necessary equipment, the EEG montage, the hardware setup, and also gives some tips and tricks to get the most accurate results!"
             button={<RecordMyOwnSleepButton className="btn-white mt-4" />}
           />
         </Col>
diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js
index 067e16ec..819c8179 100644
--- a/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js
+++ b/web/src/views/home/sections/motivation_section.js
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ const MotivationSection = () => (
       <h2 className="mt-3">Why Would I Analyze My Sleep?</h2>
       <p className="lead text-justify">
         Although we spend a major part of our day sleeping, we cannot truly understand what happens during this time, as
-        sleep is inherently an altered state of consciousness. With Polydodo we offer an accessible way to answer the
+        sleep is inherently an altered state of consciousness. With Polydodo we offer a practical and fairly accurate way to answer the
         question "How was my sleep?".
       </p>
       <p className="text-justify">
diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js
index 47f1a535..fdeee25b 100644
--- a/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js
+++ b/web/src/views/home/sections/tabs_section.js
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ const TabsSection = () => {
                   <TabPane className="tabs_section__body" tabId={`activeTab${TABS.SECOND}`}>
                     <p className="text-justify">
                       Your data is in your hand. Nothing is sent over the internet. Biosignals are sensitive data and we
-                      take your privacy very seriously. That is why everything is running locally.
+                      take your privacy very seriously. That's why everything runs locally, on your machine.
                     </p>
                   </TabPane>
                   <TabPane className="tabs_section__body" tabId={`activeTab${TABS.THIRD}`}>
diff --git a/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js b/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js
index 4f241070..4c2edbae 100644
--- a/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js
+++ b/web/src/views/home/sections/team_section.js
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ const TeamSection = () => (
             <span className="btn-inner--icon mr-1 text-primary">
               <i className="fas fa-globe" />
             </span>
-            <span className="btn-inner--text text-primary">Go To Website</span>
+            <span className="btn-inner--text text-primary">Learn more</span>
           </Button>
         </Col>
       </Row>
diff --git a/web/src/views/performance/index.js b/web/src/views/performance/index.js
index 027d4e27..58083c24 100644
--- a/web/src/views/performance/index.js
+++ b/web/src/views/performance/index.js
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ const Performance = () => {
       />
       <Container className="mt-5 text-justify">
         <p>
-          Ever wonder what is the value of this application? This page aims to illustrate the relative performance of
+          Ever wondered what is the value of this application? This page aims to illustrate the relative performance of
           our sleep scoring compared to clinical hypnogram scoring (which is usually considered the state-of-the-art
           technique).
         </p>