From d007615859573777791522d882bec5029dbac00c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrew Podgorski Date: Fri, 22 Nov 2019 01:46:09 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammatical and spelling fixes across the codebase --- code/game/machinery/computer/camera.dm | 2 +- code/game/machinery/computer/dna_console.dm | 2 +- code/game/machinery/slotmachine.dm | 4 ++-- code/game/machinery/suit_storage_unit.dm | 2 +- code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm | 8 ++++---- code/game/objects/items/stunbaton.dm | 2 +- .../objects/structures/signs/signs_departments.dm | 14 +++++++------- code/modules/assembly/mousetrap.dm | 2 +- code/modules/mob/living/silicon/pai/pai_shell.dm | 4 ++-- .../mob/living/simple_animal/bot/construction.dm | 8 ++++---- .../mob/living/simple_animal/friendly/lizard.dm | 2 +- .../chemistry/reagents/alcohol_reagents.dm | 2 +- .../code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm | 2 +- .../code/game/objects/items/storage/backpack.dm | 3 +-- .../atmospherics/machinery/pipes/bluespace.dm | 2 +- .../modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm | 2 +- .../code/modules/research/designs/tool_designs.dm | 2 +- 17 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/game/machinery/computer/camera.dm b/code/game/machinery/computer/camera.dm index 9f7f1e067d56..ff79ae7ab33a 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/computer/camera.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/computer/camera.dm @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ /obj/machinery/computer/security/telescreen/entertainment name = "entertainment monitor" - desc = "Damn, they better have the /tg/ channel on these things." + desc = "Damn, they better have the Yogs Channel on these things... Nope, just the /tg/ channel! Aww..." icon = 'icons/obj/status_display.dmi' icon_state = "entertainment_blank" network = list("thunder") diff --git a/code/game/machinery/computer/dna_console.dm b/code/game/machinery/computer/dna_console.dm index 8ba7aee60855..b1dfc46d50ae 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/computer/dna_console.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/computer/dna_console.dm @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if(LAZYLEN(stored_chromosomes) < max_chromosomes) I.forceMove(src) stored_chromosomes += I - to_chat(user, "You insert [I]") + to_chat(user, "You insert [I].") else to_chat(user, "You cannot store any more chromosomes.") return diff --git a/code/game/machinery/slotmachine.dm b/code/game/machinery/slotmachine.dm index b15b2506e248..2b4555538a8b 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/slotmachine.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/slotmachine.dm @@ -107,14 +107,14 @@ var/obj/item/holochip/H = I if(!user.temporarilyRemoveItemFromInventory(H)) return - to_chat(user, "You insert [H.credits] holocredits into [src]'s!") + to_chat(user, "You insert [H.credits] holocredits into [src]'s holoreader!") balance += H.credits qdel(H) else to_chat(user, "This machine is only accepting coins!") else if(I.tool_behaviour == TOOL_MULTITOOL) if(balance > 0) - visible_message("[src] says, 'ERROR! Please empty the machine balance before altering paymode'") //Prevents converting coins into holocredits and vice versa + visible_message("[src] says, 'ERROR! Please empty the machine balance before altering paymode.'") //Prevents converting coins into holocredits and vice versa else if(paymode == HOLOCHIP) paymode = COIN diff --git a/code/game/machinery/suit_storage_unit.dm b/code/game/machinery/suit_storage_unit.dm index 331a66d0dd83..ad742392072c 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/suit_storage_unit.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/suit_storage_unit.dm @@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ return storage = I - visible_message("[user] inserts [I] into [src]", "You load [I] into [src].") + visible_message("[user] inserts [I] into [src].", "You load [I] into [src].") update_icon() return diff --git a/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm b/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm index f62cab1fceda..7e24c6638b72 100644 --- a/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm +++ b/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm @@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ GENE SCANNER to_chat(user, "Warning: slime is starving!") else if (T.nutrition < T.get_hunger_nutrition()) to_chat(user, "Warning: slime is hungry") - to_chat(user, "Electric change strength: [T.powerlevel]") + to_chat(user, "Electric charge strength: [T.powerlevel]") to_chat(user, "Health: [round(T.health/T.maxHealth,0.01)*100]%") if (T.slime_mutation[4] == T.colour) to_chat(user, "This slime does not evolve any further.") @@ -662,13 +662,13 @@ GENE SCANNER if (T.slime_mutation[3] == T.slime_mutation[4]) if (T.slime_mutation[2] == T.slime_mutation[1]) to_chat(user, "Possible mutation: [T.slime_mutation[3]]") - to_chat(user, "Genetic destability: [T.mutation_chance/2] % chance of mutation on splitting") + to_chat(user, "Genetic instability: [T.mutation_chance/2] % chance of mutation on splitting") else to_chat(user, "Possible mutations: [T.slime_mutation[1]], [T.slime_mutation[2]], [T.slime_mutation[3]] (x2)") - to_chat(user, "Genetic destability: [T.mutation_chance] % chance of mutation on splitting") + to_chat(user, "Genetic instability: [T.mutation_chance] % chance of mutation on splitting") else to_chat(user, "Possible mutations: [T.slime_mutation[1]], [T.slime_mutation[2]], [T.slime_mutation[3]], [T.slime_mutation[4]]") - to_chat(user, "Genetic destability: [T.mutation_chance] % chance of mutation on splitting") + to_chat(user, "Genetic instability: [T.mutation_chance] % chance of mutation on splitting") if (T.cores > 1) to_chat(user, "Multiple cores detected") to_chat(user, "Growth progress: [T.amount_grown]/[SLIME_EVOLUTION_THRESHOLD]") diff --git a/code/game/objects/items/stunbaton.dm b/code/game/objects/items/stunbaton.dm index a09069fd11b7..03e9bd61ada9 100644 --- a/code/game/objects/items/stunbaton.dm +++ b/code/game/objects/items/stunbaton.dm @@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ return else M.visible_message("[user] has prodded [M] with [src]. Luckily it was off.", \ - "[user] has prodded you with [src]. Luckily it was off") + "[user] has prodded you with [src]. Luckily it was off.") else if(status) baton_stun(M, user) diff --git a/code/game/objects/structures/signs/signs_departments.dm b/code/game/objects/structures/signs/signs_departments.dm index b715e54d0fee..b2b3a45caabb 100644 --- a/code/game/objects/structures/signs/signs_departments.dm +++ b/code/game/objects/structures/signs/signs_departments.dm @@ -119,13 +119,13 @@ icon_state = "minskymedicb" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/medical/clone/cloning1 - name = "Cloning Division" - desc = "A sign labeling the cloning division of the station. Your last hope." + name = "Cloning Ward" + desc = "A sign labeling the cloning facilities on the station. Your last hope." icon_state = "minskyclone" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/medical/clone/cloning2 - name = "Cloning Division" - desc = "A sign labeling the cloning division of the station. Your last hope." + name = "Cloning Ward" + desc = "A sign labeling the cloning facilities on the station. Your last hope." icon_state = "minskycloneb" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/medical/chemistry/chemical1 @@ -140,12 +140,12 @@ /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/medical/virology/virology1 name = "Virology Division" - desc = "A sign labeling the virology division of the station. Free hugs!!!." + desc = "A sign labeling the virology division of the station. Free hugs!!" icon_state = "minskyviro" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/medical/virology/virology2 name = "Virology Division" - desc = "A sign labeling the virology division of the station. Free hugs!!!." + desc = "A sign labeling the virology division of the station. Free hugs!!" icon_state = "minskyvirob" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/security/security @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/supply/janitorial name = "Janitorial Division" - desc = "A sign labeling the janitorial closet of the station. Clean up after yourself.... please." + desc = "A sign labeling the janitorial closet of the station. Clean up after yourself... please." icon_state = "minskyjani" /obj/structure/sign/departments/minsky/supply/hydroponics diff --git a/code/modules/assembly/mousetrap.dm b/code/modules/assembly/mousetrap.dm index 5336692cba9c..397a64cd044d 100644 --- a/code/modules/assembly/mousetrap.dm +++ b/code/modules/assembly/mousetrap.dm @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if(H.m_intent == MOVE_INTENT_RUN) triggered(H) H.visible_message("[H] accidentally steps on [src].", \ - "You accidentally step on [src]") + "You accidentally step on [src].") else if(ismouse(MM)) triggered(MM) else if(AM.density) // For mousetrap grenades, set off by anything heavy diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/silicon/pai/pai_shell.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/silicon/pai/pai_shell.dm index 3e378c6183e1..61cccb5f52d8 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/silicon/pai/pai_shell.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/silicon/pai/pai_shell.dm @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ return FALSE chassis = choice update_resting() - to_chat(src, "You switch your holochassis projection composite to [chassis]") + to_chat(src, "You switch your holochassis projection composite to [chassis].") /mob/living/silicon/pai/update_resting() . = ..() @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ else icon_state = "[chassis]" if(loc != card) - visible_message("[src] [resting? "lays down for a moment..." : "perks up from the ground"]") + visible_message("[src] [resting? "lays down for a moment..." : "perks up from the ground."]") /mob/living/silicon/pai/start_pulling(atom/movable/AM, state, force = move_force, supress_message = FALSE) return FALSE diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/construction.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/construction.dm index 753f57742fef..6e86183706c9 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/construction.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/construction.dm @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ qdel(I) qdel(src) if(I.tool_behaviour == TOOL_WRENCH) - to_chat(user, "You adjust [src]'s arm slots to mount extra weapons") + to_chat(user, "You adjust [src]'s arm slots to mount extra weapons.") build_step ++ return if(istype(I, /obj/item/toy/sword)) @@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ else if(!can_finish_build(I, user)) return - to_chat(user, "You complete the Securitron!...Something seems a bit wrong with it..?") + to_chat(user, "You complete the Securitron! Something seems a bit wrong with it...?") var/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/secbot/grievous/toy/S = new(Tsec) S.name = created_name S.robot_arm = robot_arm @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ else if(!can_finish_build(I, user)) return - to_chat(user, "You complete the Securitron!...Something seems a bit wrong with it..?") + to_chat(user, "You complete the Securitron! Something seems a bit wrong with it...?") var/mob/living/simple_animal/bot/secbot/grievous/S = new(Tsec) S.name = created_name S.robot_arm = robot_arm @@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ build_step-- swordamt = 0 icon_state = initial(icon_state) - to_chat(user, "You unbolt [src]'s energy swords") + to_chat(user, "You unbolt [src]'s energy swords from the chassis.") for(var/IS in 1 to swordamt) new /obj/item/melee/transforming/energy/sword/saber(Tsec) diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/friendly/lizard.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/friendly/lizard.dm index e329dd3f2d2f..ee83f486775f 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/friendly/lizard.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/simple_animal/friendly/lizard.dm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ /mob/living/simple_animal/hostile/lizard/AttackingTarget() if(is_type_in_typecache(target,edibles)) //Makes sure player lizards only consume edibles. - visible_message("[name] consumes [target] in a single gulp", "You consume [target] in a single gulp") + visible_message("[name] consumes [target] in a single gulp.", "You consume [target] in a single gulp!") QDEL_NULL(target) //Nom adjustBruteLoss(-2) return TRUE diff --git a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/alcohol_reagents.dm b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/alcohol_reagents.dm index 30fe04122fbf..669e9dd86c92 100644 --- a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/alcohol_reagents.dm +++ b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/alcohol_reagents.dm @@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ All effects don't start immediately, but rather get worse over time; the rate is taste_description = "death, the destroyer of worlds" glass_icon_state = "proj_manhattanglass" glass_name = "Manhattan Project" - glass_desc = "A scientist's drink of choice, for thinking how to blow up the station." + glass_desc = "A scientist's drink of choice, for pondering ways to blow up the station." /datum/reagent/consumable/ethanol/manhattan_proj/on_mob_life(mob/living/carbon/M) diff --git a/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm b/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm index c3f8e8a0fedb..e921ff8f3adf 100644 --- a/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm +++ b/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/devices/scanners.dm @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ TRICORDER icon = 'yogstation/icons/obj/device.dmi' icon_state = "tricorder" item_state = "analyzer" - desc = "A multifunction hand-held device useful for data sensing, analysis, and recording" + desc = "A multifunction handheld device useful for data sensing, analysis, and recording." lefthand_file = 'icons/mob/inhands/equipment/tools_lefthand.dmi' righthand_file = 'icons/mob/inhands/equipment/tools_righthand.dmi' flags_1 = CONDUCT_1 diff --git a/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/storage/backpack.dm b/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/storage/backpack.dm index 704ba121cd49..a9e4a20dc24c 100644 --- a/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/storage/backpack.dm +++ b/yogstation/code/game/objects/items/storage/backpack.dm @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ /obj/item/storage/backpack/snail/green name = "green shell backpack" - desc = "An emerald-green snail shell converted into a backpack. Still smells of salt" + desc = "An emerald-green snail shell converted into a backpack. Still smells of salt." item_state = "snail_green" icon_state = "snail_green" @@ -210,4 +210,3 @@ alternate_worn_icon = 'yogstation/icons/mob/back.dmi' icon_state = "clownfacebackpack" item_state = "clownfacebackpack" - diff --git a/yogstation/code/modules/atmospherics/machinery/pipes/bluespace.dm b/yogstation/code/modules/atmospherics/machinery/pipes/bluespace.dm index 42de7da793cd..9334043814e0 100644 --- a/yogstation/code/modules/atmospherics/machinery/pipes/bluespace.dm +++ b/yogstation/code/modules/atmospherics/machinery/pipes/bluespace.dm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(bluespace_pipe_networks) /obj/machinery/atmospherics/pipe/bluespace/examine(user) . = ..() - . += "This one is connected to the \"[html_encode(bluespace_network_name)]\" network" + . += "This one is connected to the \"[html_encode(bluespace_network_name)]\" network." /obj/machinery/atmospherics/pipe/bluespace/SetInitDirections() initialize_directions = dir diff --git a/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm b/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm index 83279a34e6c4..76afd02420ff 100644 --- a/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm +++ b/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /datum/design/nanite_heart name = "Nanite Heart" - desc = "A heart that improves the functions of nanites" + desc = "A heart made of nanites that improves their function in the body." id = "nanite_heart" build_type = PROTOLATHE | MECHFAB construction_time = 80 diff --git a/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/tool_designs.dm b/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/tool_designs.dm index 5e2b22aa5197..89cc7ff6159f 100644 --- a/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/tool_designs.dm +++ b/yogstation/code/modules/research/designs/tool_designs.dm @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ /datum/design/tricorder name = "Tricorder" - desc = "A multifunction hand-held device useful for data sensing, analysis, and recording" + desc = "A multifunction handheld device useful for data sensing, analysis, and recording." id = "tricorder" build_type = PROTOLATHE materials = list(MAT_METAL=500,MAT_SILVER=300,MAT_GOLD=300)