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* More singular they; * general sensitivity.
Only word I found: two cases of `Internet`, two of `internet`, I went with `internet` but could reverse it just as well.
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A couple suggestions re pronouns, but 👍 either way.
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What about changing this to avoid using a pronoun?
- Wants people to actually use the project and give feedback
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| * Manage personal time so project demands don’t overwhelm him/her | ||
| * Manage personal time so project demands don’t overwhelm them |
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Same suggestion here:
- Manage personal time so project demands don’t become overwhelming
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Thought of that as well. I applied some regex-fu, so it’s very much programmable. I’d say separate retext plugins. The first makes a very good example for a guide on how to use retext! The second is a bit harder, the whole reason Oxfords should be used is because if they aren’t, they’re ambiguous to humans, so a computer will also show false-positives 😬 |
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Your suggestions: even better! Added! |
I tend to prefer separate commits, but am not opinionated about it. We don't have any contribution guidelines here yet, so anything goes. 👐 |
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thanks for catching all these errors! much appreciated!

I read the guide for the second time today and found a tiny few small things. First of all: it’s already really well written, so I didn’t have much to add
Internetvs.internet. Both occurred twice. I opted for the latter but can also go with the former if need be (ee2fc4a);your your, one,,, a weird plural, and a missing space (801896a);him/herwiththemetc. Oh, there was also anexecution, which isn’t really bad per se but I opted forimplementationinstead (5bc3eda).Again, really well written, not much to add! 👍
Oh, and finally, not sure whether y’all prefer more squashing, or less squashing. I normally squash everything into one commit but I think GH prefers multiple commits? Hope this is ok!