doc-book: Improve clarity of Sync in Concurrency

[critiqjo]

Fixes #28458

Details about Arc may be too soon to be described together with Sync... Tell me what you think.

r? @steveklabnik

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[critiqjo]

The above code snippet without Arc will most likely be thought of like this, which gives a "capture of moved value" error...

[critiqjo]

I have incorporated the changes you suggested. Please have a look at them...

[steveklabnik]

Will try to do tonight or tomorrow.

[critiqjo]

Made a few more improvements...

[critiqjo]

Do you think it is unnecessary to point out "i at the time of spawn()" (yet again)..?

[steveklabnik]

i think it's fine.

[critiqjo]

I was reading "Closures" and found some scope for improvement in Returning closures:

But why doesn’t our closure implement &'static Fn? Well, as we discussed before, closures borrow their environment. And in this case, our environment is based on a stack-allocated 5, the num variable binding. So the borrow has a lifetime of the stack frame.

But shouldn't the primary reading of the error message be "expected a static reference, found an object"? Further, we could point out that one cannot -- create something, turn it into a static object, and then return a static reference to it...

The "reference to stack allocated num" part can be explained after the next example block...

If you agree with me in this, shall I make these changes in this PR (as a second commit), or should I issue a new PR?

[steveklabnik]

@critiqjo yeah, let's keep the two things separate. I'm not sure exactly what you mean, but I'd rather talk about it in a new issue and or PR

[steveklabnik]

@bors: r+ rollup

[bors]

📌 Commit a0f214e has been approved by steveklabnik