Skip to content
Merged
Changes from all commits
Commits
File filter

Filter by extension

Filter by extension

Conversations
Failed to load comments.
Loading
Jump to
Jump to file
Failed to load files.
Loading
Diff view
Diff view
19 changes: 9 additions & 10 deletions pages/home.md
Original file line number Diff line number Diff line change
Expand Up @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ permalink: /
<p class="subtitle has-text-centered is-size-4 is-size-3-tablet is-size-2-desktop">

Solid: Your data, your choice.<br>
Advancing Web standards to empower people.<br>
Advancing Web standards to empower individuals and groups.<br>

</p>
<div class="buttons is-centered">
Expand Down Expand Up @@ -49,10 +49,10 @@ permalink: /

<b>Solid</b> is a
<a href="{{site.baseurl}}/TR/protocol">specification</a>
that lets people store their data securely in decentralized data stores
called <b>Pods</b>. Pods are like secure personal web servers for
data. When data is stored in someone's Pod, they control which
people and applications can access it.
that lets individuals and groups store their data securely in
decentralized data stores called <b>Pods</b>. Pods are like secure
web servers for data. When data is stored in a Pod, its owners
control which people and applications can access it.
</p>

<div class="buttons">
Expand All @@ -75,9 +75,8 @@ permalink: /

Any kind of data can be stored in a Solid Pod, from structured
data to regular files that you might store in a Google Drive
or Dropbox folder. People can
grant or revoke access to any slice of their
data as needed.
or Dropbox folder. Individuals and groups can grant or
revoke access to any slice of their data as needed.

</p>
<div class="buttons">
Expand Down Expand Up @@ -133,7 +132,7 @@ permalink: /
Anyone or anything that accesses data in a Solid Pod uses a
unique ID, authenticated by a decentralized extension of OpenID
Connect. Solid's access control system uses these IDs to
determine whether a person or application has access to a
determine whether a person, group, or application has access to a
resource in a Pod.
</p>
</div>
Expand All @@ -154,7 +153,7 @@ permalink: /
applications and data</p>
<p class="subtitle is-4">
Data stored in Solid Pods can power ecosystems of
interoperable applications where individuals are free to use their data
interoperable applications where individuals and groups are free to use their data
seamlessly across different applications and services.</p>
</div>
</div>
Expand Down