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This removes the mentions at the beginning of each unit to finding the tutorial code at that stage. For better maintenance, we've decided to only maintain the completed, final tutorial product.

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@sarah11918 sarah11918 added the tutorial Content/UI for the Build a Blog Tutorial label Sep 19, 2023
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Looks good, but a couple of notes to maybe think about.

## Where are you going?

In this unit, you'll
In this unit, you'll:
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I know it's what it's there already, but not sure reducing "you will" to "you'll" is the best...

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I actually changed this too at first, but a) other sections do use "you'll" liberally. (though you're right, I don't like it in such a short sentence) and b) thought it might be easier on the translators not to do too much editing here. 😆

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Yeah, I do think most languages wouldn't actually change the sentence, it's just a shortening and it's merged with other changes. It'd be way worse if it was just that change alone.

I'd change it imho, but it's not a big issue at all.

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And you did while I was typing lol 😄

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Giving this the conceptual sign-off once the typo @itsmatteomanf spotted is fixed. Nice work @sarah11918 — really like the “Looking ahead” heading.

Co-authored-by: Matteo Manfredi <matteo@manfredi.io>
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LGTM! 🎉

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