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あなたのコードを上の例と比較してみてください。また、チュートリアルを始めたばかりであれば、StackBlitzでフォークして、ここからブラウザ上でコーディングを始めてください。

## これから向かう場所
## 概要
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原文ではLooking aheadですが、どう訳したものか悩んでいます。
直訳すると「先を見据える」「未来を見据える」のようになると思いますが、かなり大袈裟な言い回しな気がしており…。
ユニットの内容を箇条書きにまとめているので「概要」としてみたものの、意訳しすぎな気もします。

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私だったら直訳して「先を見据えて」とかにします
今回のケースなら意訳して「概要」としなくても、直訳で雰囲気を合わせれば通じると思っています
分かりやすさを重視するなら「概要」でも良いと思います！

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「概要」でもそれほど違和感はなさそうですが、Looking ahead は「これからおこなうことを眺める」、つまり「前方に広がる景色を眺める」ようなイメージなので、より近い意味の日本語の名詞だと「展望」とか「眺望」とかが思い浮かびました。

あるいは、自分であれば「ここからの眺め」とか「ここから見える景色」みたいに英語のニュアンスに寄せて訳すかなと思いました。

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コメントありがとうございます。
概要でも違和感ないと言っていただいて、確かにそうかも、と思ったので、ここはわかりやすさ重視で「概要」としてみます！

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LGTM👍

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LGTM! Great work peeps 🚀

@yanthomasdev yanthomasdev merged commit 106c3bf into withastro:main Oct 11, 2023
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i18n(ja) Update under tutorial/6-islands/ (#5003)
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* Follow d61fcd8

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* Follow 0b2ebea

* Fix translation

* Match the translation to the wording decided in #5017

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Co-authored-by: Yan Thomas <61414485+Yan-Thomas@users.noreply.github.com>
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